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A Flame Once Burned

The Flame Burnt Hot. The air was thin, standing looking out of the small window Flying to Tunisia through a cloud level that was low Stretching my legs and peering down the fuselage From the flight deck, appeared the man who was definitely in charge. His dark good looks struck me, they hit me like a blow He came and stood in front of me and then he said “Hello.” Dark limpid brown eyes, dressed in a uniform so smart If we had been there longer, he may have stolen my beating heart. Holding in his hand, a bar of dark chocolate Broke a piece off it, and asked me if I’d like to partake. Not being a fan of chocolate, but I am a fan of a uniform so grand I let him feed it to me out of his large, strong, tanned hand. The flame was burning bright as we looked deep into each others eyes When my husband tapped him on the shoulder much to our surprise The pilot turned and offered him a piece of chocolate too I think you may guess the answer, and what he told him then to do. The flame that burned oh so hot, was snuffed in just a second A warning to all those girls, for whom a uniform may beckon When a tall dark pilot offers to feed you from his hand Make sure there’s no one around round so that flame can then be fanned… © 27/11/2012~GG~ Based very loosely on a true story lol

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Date: 12/11/2012 3:24:00 PM
Made me chuckle Goldie..nice to hve hubbie jealous a wee bit on occasion! Congrad's on your win. Happy hoildays. Light & Love
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Date: 12/12/2012 12:56:00 AM
You have to keep them on their toes Debbie lol xx
Date: 12/11/2012 5:26:00 AM
Two thumbs up my friend Mandy for this fantastic win...big congratulations!! hugs!! :)
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Date: 12/11/2012 5:49:00 AM
Hug back at you Maria love xx
Date: 12/11/2012 1:42:00 AM
number one, you are congrats
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Date: 12/11/2012 5:48:00 AM
Thanks harry xx
Date: 12/10/2012 5:23:00 PM
Glad this one took 1st place! Big congrats! Hugs
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:02:00 AM
Thanks Cecilia, don't forget joint first love xx
Date: 12/10/2012 3:49:00 PM
Mandy, Congratulations with your awesome win in the "A Flame Once Burned " contest... always~PD
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:01:00 AM
Thanks PD xx
Date: 12/10/2012 3:20:00 PM
Lovely and awesome piece,Mandy..Congratulations on your top place win in this contest...Kudos to you ,dear friend....
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:01:00 AM
Thanks Olusegun, you are a pal xx
Date: 12/10/2012 1:08:00 PM
Congrats Mandy. This was quite a little peek. :)
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Date: 12/11/2012 1:00:00 AM
Thanks Robert xx
Date: 12/10/2012 1:01:00 PM
Mandy, I can see why your entry placed 1st. It's delightfully clever and returns a smile that developed on that evening flight to Tunisia. You see, I was there, just out of ear shot, taking a smoke break. I remember the occasion well.... Love Ya..... Jake
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Date: 12/10/2012 2:19:00 PM
So it was you, I thought so could tell fromm your avatar lol xx
Date: 12/10/2012 12:41:00 PM
Wonderful! Congrats on a fabulous win :)
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:05:00 AM
I liked the part when your husband showed up and told him to.... Very nice write Mandy. Congratulations.
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:21:00 AM
Thanks Sean, in reality hubby accepted the chocolate, unlike me he is a chocolate lover lol xx
Date: 12/10/2012 11:02:00 AM
wow Mandy well done I saw it was a winner when you wrote it....Seren
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:20:00 AM
Thanks Seren, ha that's usually a kiss of death when someone says that.xx
Date: 12/10/2012 10:47:00 AM
congrats on your super win Mandy...
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Date: 12/10/2012 11:01:00 AM
Thanks Joseph my friend xx
Date: 12/10/2012 9:21:00 AM
Congratz on your win Mandy, lol it must be very surprised to see your husband suddenly coming while the flame of love was on fire XD, but still I enjoyed "the moment":D -hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/10/2012 10:06:00 AM
As I say Yanny it is only loosely based on a true story lol Thanks xx
Date: 11/30/2012 4:20:00 PM
Very well done Mandy, got a chuckle outta this one, blessings Carl
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Date: 12/1/2012 3:35:00 AM
Thanks Carl, bless you xx
Date: 11/30/2012 12:20:00 PM
nicely penned Mandy....winning wishes.....
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Date: 11/30/2012 1:10:00 PM
Thanks Joseph xx
Date: 11/28/2012 8:07:00 PM
I will heed your warning Mandy dear, big smile....love this write of yours and the twist it took at the end. Hugs
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Date: 11/29/2012 12:17:00 AM
Thanks Cecilia don't go round men in uniform with out your own man at your side, they are so hard to resist lol xx
Date: 11/28/2012 5:48:00 AM
mmmmm uniforms , nearly as good as welsh rugby mens butts in shorts, she swoons graciously.......Seren Great write hun ..
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Date: 11/28/2012 6:23:00 AM
yes, doctor's have the worst one's poor you. Cor a nice butt in a uniform phew xx
Date: 11/28/2012 5:19:00 AM
This poem was quite interesting. You gotta watch those guys in uniform, they can be very devilish. Take care and thanks for reading my recent poem, Jancarl
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Date: 11/28/2012 5:28:00 AM
My pleasure Jancarl xx
Date: 11/27/2012 4:46:00 PM
You, naughty girl, Mandy. Don't they look good in them? Funny write.
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:22:00 AM
Oh gosh Toquyen, love a uniform, they do something for a man they really do . lol xx
Date: 11/27/2012 4:07:00 PM
What a hoot Miss Mandy lady! Absolutely adorable tale... loved it! More like this please!!! Love from across the pond! xox
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:21:00 AM
Thanks Jack, high praise indeed form the king of chuckles xx
Date: 11/27/2012 2:34:00 PM
lol, wow, and it's kind of true - had a chuckle here : )
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:20:00 AM
Yes kinda true Jack...... glad it gave you a chuckle xx
Date: 11/27/2012 2:12:00 PM
While reading, laughter escaped from my breath. Too funny. It sounds like you enjoyed penning these words. Great write Mandy. Sending smile, Connie
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:19:00 AM
Thankss Connie, glad you enjoyed it xx
Date: 11/27/2012 2:03:00 PM
Mandy, you are a hoot. I loved the twist on this fun poem. I hope I can do as well on that challenge!
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Date: 11/28/2012 1:18:00 AM
ha owls hoot... and you know you will blast this with one of yours, but thanks for the compliment lol xx
Date: 11/27/2012 12:07:00 PM
Best to blow it out. :) Fun little adventure, hopefully only in your mind. God knows, I've certainly let my mind go places best only in my imagination. :) Enjoyed the little trist. Well written and rhymed.
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Date: 11/27/2012 12:28:00 PM
It es well and truly snuffed Robert, as you say imagination is a wonderful thing xx
Date: 11/27/2012 9:51:00 AM
Dear Mandy, Hope this finds YOU and YOURS Healthy and High in the Spirit. a Remarkable Write YOUR Poetry is so true to life I enjoy YOUR POEMS so very much YOUR Laureatus Style intrigues me LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER YOUR Eternal (Young Liege.. .Harry
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Date: 11/27/2012 10:22:00 AM
Thank you Harry, I really do appreciate all your lovely comment xx
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