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A Flame About Bum High

D'ya know what burns this guy's ass A flame about bum high sometimes ignites the gas An explosion follows closely The odour is quite grossly For creativeness I go to the head of the class © Jack Ellison 2016

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Funom Makama

Date: 1/2/2016 10:48:00 AM

Happy new year fellow poet. This is lovely. Really, really lovely

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2016 1:42:00 PM

LOL Silliness eh!!! Happy New Year dear friend!!!

Theresa Cw

Date: 1/1/2016 11:31:00 PM

I so agree with Laura, Happy New Year dear Jack... you really got me giggling with this one.... Love and Hugs// Theresa

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2016 9:09:00 AM

Love your sweet wee pussy cat avatar! Love you dear Theresa! Happy 2016! Love and huggsies, Jack xoxox

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 1/1/2016 10:12:00 PM

Happy New Year sweet Jack! This one got me giggling. ^^ Always, Laura

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2016 9:08:00 AM

Awww whatta sweetie... hap hap happy new year to you dearest Laura!!! Love, Jack xox

Carol Eastman

Date: 1/1/2016 2:01:00 PM

Burning a candle will remove the stink... Dragon does it better, don't you think...We're lucky for Trolls make a really big stink... Without Dragon our eyes would water at a never ending brink... Naw, just kidding, I'm giving you a wink...

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2016 9:06:00 AM

Never a dull moment eh Carol! LOL xox

Gwen Benita Mason Gibbs

Date: 1/1/2016 8:35:00 AM

That's right Jack ring in the new year with a big bang, : } you are hilarious, love ya Jack, have a very Happy and Blessed New Year!

Jack Ellison
Date: 1/2/2016 9:05:00 AM

Love big bangs!!! LOL Happy New Year dear Gwen!!! xox