A Fisherman

a fisherman in a boat on the loch - - nessie attacks for Seren’s Fisherman contest 18th November

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2013 12:55:00 PM

Jack, tell me it is not so... I'm not wishing to hear your wife left..--------... Jack, yes I have been sad and hurt by something that happened here on the soup. so i decided to stay on the down low... but ..i read your comment... and many here I call my friends... but, you I know your heart and friendship are true. you have been nothing but sweet to me. I'm sending you some soup mail...in a few minutes... pd

Joe Maverick

Date: 12/18/2012 11:56:00 AM

A deep and watery mission Jack, but You pulled this one off.."

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/15/2012 7:02:00 AM

Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara

Carrie Richards

Date: 12/14/2012 2:25:00 PM

Not exactly what he had in mind to fry up for dinner!! Funny haiku !

Robert Jerore

Date: 12/14/2012 10:54:00 AM

Jack you certainly left the door open... all kinds of scenarios available from here on. "After several days of searching the loch, a single oar was sighted, bobbing in the waves of a shallow inlet near shore." YarnSpinner...

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 12/14/2012 7:53:00 AM

Congratulations friend Jack on your very nice win. Cheers!!! (^_^)

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/14/2012 1:56:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning spot Jack ,always a laugh xx

Seren Roberts

Date: 12/13/2012 10:22:00 PM

Congratulations Jack on your 3rd place in my contest.....Seren

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/7/2012 2:41:00 PM

another gem from you jack...

David Williams

Date: 11/19/2012 11:42:00 AM

Jack, hope he has a big paddle, well done I like it and good luck...David

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/19/2012 12:24:00 AM

great idea Jack luv to use that 'monster' to entice the theme of this challenge .. winning wishes my friend ..

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/18/2012 6:33:00 PM

oh, you are so funny when you do them short like this and so cleverly, Jack, for the contests!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/18/2012 2:03:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one that is a mixture of excitement and scary...I am glad that I chose it to read this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by ..Your presence at my work is always uplifting..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/18/2012 1:31:00 PM

Hope you will get something on the hook, :) :) :) .... good luck Jack!! - Well written - Have a nice Sunday afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 11/18/2012 1:24:00 PM

A giggle from me here Jack, nice xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2012 12:51:00 PM

I love how you called her nessie, that is quite funny my friend! It's been awhile since I've read one of your writes, it's really nice to be able to do so once again! What a dynamic and harmonious poem, Great Work!!

Rollo West

Date: 11/18/2012 11:55:00 AM

Hi Jack, This is a really good one. Rollo