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A First Stolen Date-W

It was a stolen date on a late winter evening Placing rosy dots on her cheek with a hug A secret told to the senses instead to ears Then found the right place for the kisses, Kisses stamped one after the other like tears. The real ones that I could not hold them back. There were brief, swift and before were done The floodgates open for everything else Starting with a comma then a question mark Followed by an exclamation point learning The basic spelling that all lovers should know. I began the kiss and she begged more at the end. ================================= Third Place win in Contest : My First date sponsored by Carol brown

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Date: 3/24/2014 10:43:00 PM
Dr. Ram Such a creative and fun write. Full of love, passion and sweetness. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Blind Dates poem
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Date: 10/15/2011 2:59:00 PM
Seeing this one again. I really liked this one!
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Date: 7/16/2011 8:23:00 AM
Dr. Ram, it sounds like you were learning a lot more than the rules of punctuation on this first date. what a creative way to discuss the learning of kissing! Congrats.
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Date: 7/16/2011 12:22:00 AM
Congratulations Dr Mehta! Dalila
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Date: 7/15/2011 9:45:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Lee
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Date: 7/15/2011 6:05:00 PM
The rosy dots? forget me nots, great verse without this question. Well done sir, on ya, Don
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Date: 7/15/2011 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your 3rd place win!
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Date: 7/15/2011 2:10:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your terrific third place win in first date contest with this dynamite write luv..
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Date: 7/15/2011 12:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in my contest and thank you for supporting my contest Dr. Ram. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 9:01:00 AM
Wonderful!!! This is really sweet and creative! :)
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Date: 7/7/2011 7:49:00 AM
Nicely done. i like the grammar words and how you used them to emphasize what was going on. very clever. good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/7/2011 5:07:00 AM
nice job with this write full of emotion good luck in the contest. cory
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Date: 7/7/2011 4:23:00 AM
oh, dr. ram, how romantic... well, i was sooo naive then! love your word scenes.. winning wishes with hugggs, nette
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Date: 7/7/2011 3:01:00 AM
A romantic write here Dr Mehta....enjoyed very much...
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Date: 7/6/2011 8:54:00 PM
Enjoyed this sweet romantic write of your first date. Yes, it is a learning process in the art of dating. love phyl
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Date: 7/6/2011 6:52:00 PM
A short tale that I enjoyed reading on my break. Loved it, especially the last two lines.
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Date: 7/6/2011 5:43:00 PM
delicate all through every line ..sweet and romantic Dr. Ram.. good luck in the contest my friend.. hope u had a wonderful holiday weekend on the 4th luv..
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:25:00 PM
oh dear, I hear that you been bad, or only exclamations:) great verse i see, on ya, Don
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Date: 7/6/2011 3:11:00 PM
I am a little lost in this one Dr Ram, but have enjoyed reading your words..
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Date: 7/6/2011 2:49:00 PM
love and tobacco...hand in hand...beautiful write Dr Mehta ! Passion provokes us a lot...this is what I feel while writing a poem...
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Michael Wayne
Date: 7/10/2011 7:57:00 AM
tobacco?

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