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A Finger

A finger that helped me to walk, They are my parents, light in dark, They are shadow in my summer And blanket in my winter, When Spring lost it's length, I feel thousands of finger around me And I get strength. A finger having nail polished with red She is my heart, dream of my bed, Flavour of my breakfast, And vitamin of my bread. When vitamin lost it's strength I feel thousands of finger around me And I get a breadth. A finger very small and soft, A velvet light coupled with my thought, They are golden rays of morning, And silver beams of my night, When evening will loose it's light, I will definitely feel thousands of finger around me, And get a flight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/27/2018 12:29:00 PM
Beautifully crafted. Well done. I truly enjoyed this.
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Date: 6/13/2018 11:55:00 PM
Your sweets thoughts shine all over the poem dear friend Manmath D. Beautiful write. With best wishes ..Ravindra K Kapoor
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 8/8/2018 5:56:00 PM
Thank u Sir.
Date: 5/24/2018 5:54:00 AM
A sweet write that speaks loving thoughts.
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Date: 3/6/2018 1:03:00 AM
as we read we feel ... enjoy the touches and and sights ... breath of pure delight ...
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 8/8/2018 5:57:00 PM
Thanks a lot
Date: 12/27/2017 5:21:00 PM
This is profound and it is beautiful and touching, and beautifully touching! I love the three themes and the love embraced in each stanza. Your poem moved me, Manmath, I think I love it! All the best ... CayCay
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 12/28/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thanks a lot
Date: 12/27/2017 3:00:00 PM
Manmath, The glory of your words shine through in this translated piece. I love the way your poem progresses with the theme of a finger for each stanza, embracing your parental, romantic and fatherly love. This is magnificent! A Fave from me! I hope you had a lovely holiday! : )
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 12/28/2017 10:08:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 12/17/2017 2:01:00 PM
Well written Manmath... Nice to see you back..
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Date: 12/11/2017 3:02:00 AM
- A lot of love around you, Manmath :) - A lovely poem - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 12/11/2017 3:47:00 AM
Thanks Anne

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