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A Few Words About Vanity

Sooner or later, aging betrays us and vanity, supposedly, saves us. Men included but women especially fall prey to its superficiality with measures used no better than the least skilled mortician, and the end results are about as good as any corpse laid out. It’s all but impossible to restore what we once looked like before no matter the “magic” improvements or promised “miracle” enhancements. If in doubt these are in error, believe what you see in a mirror. My advice to men and women is this: Avoid a surgeon who was a taxidermist. Look your age, not like hell, accept aging as inevitable.

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Date: 3/20/2023 3:54:00 AM
This is spot on! Absolutely like taxidermy of the mediocre kind. Where it's clear the fox was already having a bad day before it got stuffed... I feel bad that some procedures aren't reversible. I can cope better with wrinkles than the multitude of horrors I've seen. Excellent poem which nails why it doesn't look good in a way I couldn't quite comprehend before!
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 3/20/2023 6:31:00 AM
Thanks for commenting on my poem on vanity. Granted, we don't all age the same, including men.My mother died at 97 but looked much younger, and she was addicted to cosmetics! / Maurice
Date: 3/13/2023 7:29:00 PM
I only use light foundation to blend my face. It is an honor to grow to old age. Acceptance and wisdom are best.
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:07:00 PM
this is very appropriate after watching the academy awards last night and seeing a number of women in the audience with those locked-in-place faces, which look a lot worse than the wrinkled faces they probably had before. good one, maurice!
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Date: 3/13/2023 6:25:00 AM
Made me laugh, Maurice. "mortician" "taxidermist" nine times out of ten they actually look worse. A pleasure to read this morning. Started my day off right. have a great day my friend
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Maurice Rigoler
Date: 3/13/2023 6:48:00 AM
Sadly my poem on vanity reflects more truth than not. And men, too, suffer the vicissitudes of aging. Thanks for the stop by. Enjoy your day./ Maurice

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