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A Fence, a Bridge and Me

The fence on which my feelings pause Forever will be lost for cause For should it stop my love to flow Would pain me more than I could know For fences keep out or keep in To build one would be such a sin And should one born to me exist It’s time to let it be dismissed A bridge, far better to be built With no embarrassment or guilt Where differences can meet to learn That bridges are not meant to burn Perhaps then I can follow through On feelings that I have for you Though you think differently than me It’s not just difference that I see

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Date: 4/30/2023 6:41:00 AM
Another clever write Mike, bridges help to expand discussion, find a source to problems but putting up a fence builds distrust, animosty and no way way forward. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 5/1/2023 10:43:00 AM
Thank you so much Jennifer xxoo Happy Monday!
Date: 4/27/2023 4:48:00 PM
bridge vs. fence. Such a cool rendering of your metaphor.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/27/2023 5:39:00 PM
Thank you Andrea!!!
Date: 4/26/2023 8:38:00 PM
Pull away fences and make bridges so that there are no barriers but only connecting links ! So beautifully written, dear Mike.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/27/2023 4:30:00 AM
Thank you so much Valsa xxoo
Date: 4/26/2023 7:13:00 PM
Mike, you have such a melodic way of expressing concepts with which others, including me, struggle to convey. Simply profound! Huzzah! ~ Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 7:55:00 PM
GW, thank you for the lovely compliment!!
Date: 4/26/2023 7:09:00 PM
This is beautiful in every way and should be poem of the day. The message within is uplifting and holds so much truth. My heart is smiling. I'm placing this in my favorites, to read again and again. Happy Wednesday, Mike. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 7:55:00 PM
You’re so sweet Brandy, thank you!!!
Date: 4/26/2023 10:15:00 AM
I enjoyed this today and the positive way it is written. Thank you for sharing. Happy Wednesday :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 4:48:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi,xxoo
Date: 4/26/2023 7:55:00 AM
- Absolutely great written, Mike - Wise thoughts :) - hugs
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 4/26/2023 7:52:00 AM
A touch forlorn yet, loving sentiments throughout, Mike. I like your message.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 8:06:00 AM
Thank you Vijay!!
Date: 4/26/2023 2:40:00 AM
Loved the lesson that bridges should not be burned.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/26/2023 4:08:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor!!
Date: 4/24/2023 5:38:00 PM
Beautifully written and said Mike….Debx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/25/2023 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much Deb xxoo
Date: 4/24/2023 2:12:00 PM
Hi Mike, Good message for one to live by. Well done. Have wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2023 2:57:00 PM
Thanks so much Alexis xxoo
Date: 4/24/2023 8:40:00 AM
Love the message in your verse Mike, If only mankind built more bridges to unite us what a better world it would be. Hope you're keeping well, just back from Rhodes. Tom
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2023 2:56:00 PM
Just back from San Francisco! , thanks Tom! Have a great week!
Date: 4/24/2023 8:36:00 AM
Really nice Mike. I absolutely love the message. A joy to read you today:)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 4/24/2023 2:53:00 PM
Thank you Daniel!

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