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A Fellow Named Jack

There once was a fellow named Jack Who thought he was ahead of the pack Till one day in autumn He fell on his bottom Bumped his head and his brains fell out at the crack © Jack Ellison 2015

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Judy Konos

Date: 11/15/2015 6:12:00 AM

No Jack I never utter untruths....It's a poor dog who don't wag his own tail....and I 'bees' that poor dog....

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/15/2015 8:48:00 AM

Love you dearest Judy!!!! xoxoxox

Judy Konos

Date: 11/15/2015 6:07:00 AM

so Jack you won in the contest have you kept up with your female admirers?....http://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/poetry_soup_heros_722348#comments

Judy Konos

Date: 11/15/2015 5:57:00 AM

Hello Jack I did indeed read your tribute poem...have received soup mails and hints about it....I'm just a bit shy to respond on your poem...but thanks for thinking of me...

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/15/2015 6:04:00 AM

"SHY!!!!!" Judy... shy??? No, you utter an untruth! LOL Awww! I am shocked... it was my way of showing my love for you... a bit weird maybe... but true! Love and big hugs, Jack xoxoxoxox

Judy Konos

Date: 11/14/2015 1:39:00 PM

There once was a fellar named jack who carried his purse to whack all the guys chasing him just on a whim don't worry we've got your back!

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2015 8:30:00 PM

One can do a lot of damage with a purse! I load mine with bricks!!! Hey sweets, have you read my "Judy Judy" tribute poem??? xxxx

Tim Smith

Date: 11/14/2015 11:58:00 AM

Slipped on the ice and fell on his rear....all kinds of stars soon did appear...one shot to the right...where the sun shone so bright....he'll sit on his bum until his head is all clear

Jack Ellison
Date: 11/14/2015 8:27:00 PM

Some people's brains are located in their lower regions in the rear... not saying who!!! LOL