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A Faulty Lifejacket

I'm drowning; Kicking with all I have, Screaming as if someone will hear me- Shrill and panicked, As my lungs fill with water; My nose and mouth are smothered, I can't breathe. Burning, Burning, Everything is burning; Black dots perforate my vision, My throat is closing up- I'm trying, I'm trying so hard to stay afloat. It's not working. I'm drowning. And the worst part? The waters are calm.

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Date: 1/9/2020 8:47:00 AM
I have felt this way before, but you expressed it the best.
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