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A Fallen Star

she was above the skies before her time, praised under the pillow of clouds... the finest actress alive, unreached atop the pedastool of angels. soon fame brought fever to her bed in space, and mens eyes glowed as she gleamed down to earth. Johnny Sumler Six Lines of Poetry, Please 9-11-11

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Date: 9/13/2011 8:55:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of constance, Johnny
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:09:00 PM
I'd love to know who you write about Johnny, you give her the special treatment in such a sweet way. Great one.!
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Date: 9/13/2011 3:53:00 PM
CONGRATS JOHNNY ON ANOTHER SUPER WIN FOR THIS WONDERFUL POETRY LUV.. AMAZING..
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Date: 9/13/2011 10:28:00 AM
Nice piece Johnny. Congratulations
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Date: 9/13/2011 9:17:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Johnny. Excellent write. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 9/13/2011 8:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Constance's "Six Lines Of Poetry, Please" contest Johnny. Love,Carol
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