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A Eulogy For Brit

The child was walking home from school Almost running now, The anticipated fun awaiting him at his door The dog always knew ahead of time his coming and would always be early at the door , tail wagging , tongue flapping, The Mother always knew the time and would let the dog out the door just minutes before. The boy was just a few blocks away now smiling from ear to ear Knowing playtime with Brit was almost near Then, A tire screaching, a deathly howl, had stopped the boy in his tracks. He could feel death in the air He could feel a crushing hush settle on him He broke into another run He reached his house to see the truck driver carrying his dead friend He never knew a broken heart before that day His mother swooped him up and tried to stop the screams There seemed to be weeks of tears The boy quit playing outside and would only go out to throw stones at passing trucks to suppress his anger And one broken windshield later He was not allowed near the roadway A year had passed slowly and the parents brought another dog It was of the same breed A valiant attempt to heal a six year old heart But the memory of Brit remains to this day Forever buried in the old mans heart

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 6/14/2014 12:14:00 PM
Carl; this is sad, but very good. Sometimes life teaches us lessons when we are still very young. hey stay with us forever. Thanks for sharing. Have a blessed day... Lucilla
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Date: 6/8/2014 7:26:00 PM
Hello Carl, A heartfelt read, the momentum is superb and the ending holds up and touched my heart..., buried in the old man's heart. Touching, excellent my friend... Linda
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Date: 6/5/2014 11:11:00 AM
I felt the pain in these words,sad but loved the journey,great write Carl
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Date: 5/31/2014 10:49:00 AM
you have expressed feelings that are difficult and personal in a very tender way. .. Brit is a special work, carl.. huggs
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Carl Fraser
Date: 5/31/2014 5:22:00 PM
Thanks Nette, yup this definately brought it all back for me, and the death of my nephew, just made me ponder alot of things this week. I appreciate the visit. Blessings Carl

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