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A Dying Star

The large cigarette burn i n the sky Scorches an unforgiving landscape, Aging the ideas of mankind. This corpuscle of bubbling pus Cloaks the world with its runny yoke, Which stains a blue plate. Breakfast - Sustains a gluttonous body, And warms the vast belly Of ice tundra and desert sand Which bathe in the ashen grains of time, Until the fire dies, And its light stubbed out in an ashtray, By a little, geriatric man Who has puffed away at our dreams.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/10/2013 8:57:00 PM
Hi DOnna, a very cool and fascinating first poem on the soup.... This hear my friend is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 6/4/2013 4:44:00 PM
Donna. Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. My name is Linda; and I’m from the humid state of Texas. I’m here to invite you on over to my latest contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* please consider my contest* hopefully I can be one of your first poetry soup friends. If you ever need or want honest feedback on a certain poem let me know. Do not hesitate on clicking my name when you spot it on the soup. I look forward in following you and your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community; we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Always * Linda"
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Date: 6/3/2013 10:59:00 AM
What delightful works can do more but bring us closer to poetry! Looking forward to reading more.
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Date: 6/3/2013 4:09:00 AM
- Hi, Donna. - Welcome to P-Soup - You have posted is touching and well written poem. - I like it. - Hope you will get much pleasure from sharing your thoughts and words here with us. - You are welcome to read / comments some of my poems if you want. - Good luck, look forward to more poems from you in the future. - Have a beautiful day. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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