A Drunken Spider

A Drunken Spider There once was a huge golden-silk spider. Bobby Joe ran to sit down beside her. He threw some sticks at her web. Her frustrations did not ebb. So, he sprayed on a liquor elixir. © August 4, 2010 Dane Smith-Johnsen

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 8/7/2010 6:25:00 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your winning poem in the Limerick contest with this good one.. enjoy another sweet victory my friend..with luv..

Francine Roberts

Date: 8/7/2010 10:41:00 AM

congrats on your win

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/7/2010 3:57:00 AM

Congrats on your win, Dane

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/6/2010 10:15:00 PM

congratulations on your win, DAne Ann. LOoks like you and I both did spiders!

John Freeman

Date: 8/6/2010 11:14:00 AM

Congratulation on your drunken spider, Dane. Agape, Moses

James Fraser

Date: 8/6/2010 10:29:00 AM

Nice one Dane Ann. Spiders are just awesome insects. Many congratulations on your win in Carolyn & John's fine contest with this Limerick gem >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 8/6/2010 8:42:00 AM

Hmmm -- a new type of insecticide? Very funny, dear friend. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/6/2010 8:41:00 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Carolyn Devonshire's / John Freeman's contest "Are You Bugged". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/5/2010 3:25:00 PM

7-21-10 Constance's "Traffic Jam" Really a classic, visual Limerick, Dane. It gave me the inspirations for a "Toronto Classic" double. This one of your's should be well into the winner circle. Thanks for your comments, they are important to me. Agape, Moses