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A Dreamy Town Girl

A town girl is like an oyster's pearl, But one day has to get out of its shell. Brought up with cultures and traditions, But grows making many mutations. She wants her rights to achieve greater heights, Wants to fly like Oliver and Wilbur Wright. Wants to face the world to take her stand, Lack of family support is what lags her behind. She survives during every twist and turn of life, But her innocence gets lost during this strive. Wants someone to understand her heart and soul, Gives her the opportunity to reach her goal. I too am a town girl and these are our wants, Is there anyone who can come with us and hunt? Just want to steer our own vehicle of life, And will work hard like a bee in its hive.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 11/7/2016 12:26:00 AM
that was beautiful and congratulations for being featured, you are an inspiration to us.
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Date: 11/6/2016 9:49:00 PM
Congrats for being featured.... Nice work..
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Date: 11/4/2016 3:16:00 PM
lovely win for one who is new here... come aboard and happy congrats, sameera..huggs
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Date: 10/25/2016 3:44:00 PM
Sameera, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 10/21/2016 3:25:00 AM
An enjoyable and touching poem . I fly my kite to meet the author again. A Dreamy Town Girl is a wonder Like Fancy Fairy for a Dreamy Town Boy living in the country : like kind of Centaurus (in the sense of John Updike or like T.Hardy- Far from the madding world.
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