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A Dream Revealed

A Dream Revealed Ages ago on a battlefield I slew my foe A warrior that utterly refused to yield As blood lay rich upon the cold packed snow I took his valiant life , his sword and his shield A memory from a cold and distant past A dream from a memory darkened by sleepless nights A chill sent so very hard and fast A flash of many thrilling and honorable fights Fleeting whispers sent to cast off doubt Of standards now demanded to be cast aside Rage , furiously rage against death's final shout Dead heroes welcoming no tales of glory and pride Hades embraces fallen soldiers that failed the test Of virtue, resolve and duty soundly done Pride, courage , glory and all the rest Pale in comparison to a justice so honorably won. Awaken from a sweat soaked dream I wondered had I saw another man's fate So real, so very real it did seem To be the closing of my earthly gate...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 7/29/2014 1:58:00 PM
Robert, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:12:00 PM
When I have vivid dreams like this I always wonder if I experienced this in a past life....great job my friend...Tim
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Date: 7/28/2014 11:00:00 AM
What a vivid narration, Robert! Dreams can appear to be so real; there is much more to them than meets the eye. Congrats on your top win! // paul
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Date: 7/28/2014 10:12:00 AM
Excellent story telling, congratulations.
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Date: 7/28/2014 8:21:00 AM
Great story put to poetry! U cud change anything to poetry Robert! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 7/28/2014 6:45:00 AM
Such a give story you have told! Congrats on a great win, dear Robert.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:00:00 AM
A great win, congrats on the win, robert
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Date: 7/27/2014 11:31:00 PM
Intensely told. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 7:48:00 PM
This dream was so very real to me, because I could see the story unfolding just as you described it. A very powerful write, Robert! Wonderful work, my friend! Congratulations on your first place win!
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Date: 5/1/2014 8:45:00 AM
Very dramatic dream. I hope just a dream and not anyone's fate..Enjoyed reading today. Sara
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Robert Lindley
Date: 5/1/2014 9:48:00 AM
Thanks.. Yes, just a dream. One I had three nights in a row. I got up third morning and composed that presentation. The first version was much longer so I shortened it . Could have been an ancient warrior speaking to me from the past! I simply do not know. In the dream it is I doing the fighting and believe me it was like watching a movie! A very vivid dream.

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