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A Dream

The figure was celestial sensual was its presence with a full figure conjuring up feelings intense The spirit reminded me of woman The way it guided me gently guiding me through the desert land To the ripe fields of plenty To a peaceful place by the sea Enraptured and captured by its illumination As the dusk of the light came over me Then I woke up to a dream of imagination

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 5/19/2016 5:36:00 PM
Interesting poem and I'm wondering if this was Succubus in your dream? I recently wrote a poem about her at another poetry site during a contest... Your poem is surreal and pretty descriptive of how she operates..
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Date: 5/20/2016 5:04:00 PM
Hello Bonnie, Thanks for your kind words. This poem is based largely on the holy spirit and it being feminine in nature. Even being somewhat sensual in nature and at the same time spiritual.

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