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A Dream

A bit of solitude she thought Just to rest her eyes a moment Then into the depths she slipped Sleep as if from heaven sent Pale beauty slept the time away Not a sound or movement made When the bells of evening call The blossom picked began to fade Repose as gentle as the night Though still bloomed a bit of day Her last breath just a gentle sigh And quietly she slipped away 5/17/14 For the Dream contest

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Date: 5/30/2014 11:46:00 PM
sweet...SKAT
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Date: 5/29/2014 5:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, it a beautiful poem Barbara
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Date: 5/29/2014 4:47:00 PM
nice win...PD
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Date: 5/26/2014 10:24:00 PM
Barb:: Congratulations on your first place win Excellent interpretation of the painting. Hugs, SuZ
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:45:00 PM
A number one........and so deserving !!! Good going, Barbara!! :)
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2014 8:05:00 PM
thanks Carrie, means a lot coming from you. BG
Date: 5/26/2014 6:20:00 PM
Barbara, just beautiful! Congratulations on your first place.
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2014 7:05:00 PM
Thank you Faye.. Im pretty happy right now. Its been awhile. BG
Date: 5/26/2014 5:18:00 PM
Nice Barbara... Congratulations on winning 1st place in Isiah's contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/26/2014 2:31:00 PM
Yes she did not appear to dream, we dreamt she was, hoped she was alive but knew she was not, congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2014 7:06:00 PM
Thanks Deb.I wa hoping I wasn't the only one that thought she was dead. BG
Date: 5/26/2014 2:26:00 PM
Dear BG, I felt she had passed away too. Guess we still think alike on some things. Beautifully written! Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2014 7:07:00 PM
I think we think alike a lot..Please update me on your life/health. LNC
Date: 5/26/2014 10:51:00 AM
Hi Barbara, congratulations on this fantastic, well-deserved win! Bravo!
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Date: 5/26/2014 7:41:00 AM
Congrats on a great win BG...great write
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Barbara Gorelick
Date: 5/26/2014 7:09:00 PM
Glad you liked it. Means a lot to me. BG
Date: 5/21/2014 10:50:00 AM
Hi Barbara, This is so unique and tender. Outstanding write my friend. Thank you for sharing this write with us. Love and Peace, Deborah
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Date: 5/18/2014 2:28:00 PM
tender and beautiful write, my friend
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Date: 5/17/2014 9:32:00 PM
I found this whole poem beautifully done S3 is outstanding
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