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A Dream

A simple nap the beauty sleeps. Her stupor is deep. She seems to be thinking within this dream of a salient existence far away. Her fingers are interconnected significantly. With imagery shown from her posture, she interrelates to this world. Connotation of inner peace is seen when she lies silently sleeping. The colors that surround her while she sleeps are peripheral to where she meanders. Labyrinths in time that must be superseded for her to awaken. A simple nap the beauty sleeps. Her stupor is deep. ______________________| Penned on May 11, 2014!

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Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/13/2014 2:15:00 PM

She may be taking just a simple nap, but what is going on deep in her mind is very complex. This is a wonderful interpretation of the painting, Verlena! Good luck in Isaiah's contest!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/13/2014 2:32:00 PM

Thanks Kelly for your supportive remarks and commentary. Verlena

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2014 7:29:00 AM

Verlena - this is a beautiful entry - of the sleeping beauty. Best wishes with this submission.

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/12/2014 4:31:00 PM

Thanks Pandita for your supportive remarks. Verlena

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2014 12:11:00 AM

I enjoyed seeing this new poem of yours, sweetie. Wanted to thank you for reading so many of my poems recently.Let me read one more of yours and then I need to get to my beddie bye for the night!!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/12/2014 12:21:00 AM

Thanks Andrea for your visit. Good night. Verlena

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/11/2014 11:43:00 PM

NICE , best of luck in the contest! This line struck me as very deep... Bravo! "Labyrinths in time that must be superseded for her to awaken."

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/11/2014 11:59:00 PM

Thanks for your supportive remarks Robert. Verlena

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/11/2014 11:23:00 PM

This is finely written and has a storybook quality to it. I wish you good luck in the contest!

Verlena S. Walker
Date: 5/11/2014 11:26:00 PM

Thanks Jake for your positive and in depth commentary. You gave me what I was looking for. Verlena :0))s.