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A Dream

Cerulean sky, a dove with an olive branch no marchpast below, no guns,armymen waiting patiently to receive it. This dream in my mind, flowers in armymen's hands, single sky above, only one race called-Human for blood has just one colour. © kash poet *Will put this poem in bottles and float in the Indian Ocean. ===================000====================

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  1. Date: 1/2/2013 1:36:00 PM
    A beautiful Poem Kash, we are what we are. one race called _Human. wish my blood was blue. I hate belonging to the same crowd. i meant 2 say race*LUV~SKAT

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 5:00:00 AM
    very good poem

  1. Date: 7/10/2012 8:10:00 PM
    I see you are here. Go back to the comment you wrote at my most recent poem and see what I put under your comment. I added a hint so people would guess what I was writing about. Hopefully you will now understand. Also read the funny comments I am getting about this non-existent friend of mine, Mary Ann. haha. I guess it was way too symbolic!

  1. Date: 6/30/2012 3:24:00 PM
    Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:25:00 PM
    Congratulations on your 1st Place win in Cyndi's "Great Soup Release" contest Kash. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 11:24:00 AM
    Kash, congrats on your win..excellent..David

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 7:53:00 AM
    congrats Kash on a grand first place win for this stunning write luv.. also thankxx for helping me out with my rhyme scheme too.. I redid my work.. u are a cool dude and great friend luvc..

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 2:36:00 PM
    HI, again, Just reviewing all the poems on this other lid and I remember this well. Congrats. Of coure you doul be on tihs lits!!

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 10:41:00 AM
    yes Kash a brilliant we all want to attain.. and I too want my message in a bottle on the ocean waves close to my heart.. best wishes luv.. this is a winner ..

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 9:04:00 AM
    How is it going, Kash? I need to get off here. always I am making myself late for the gym!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:00:00 AM
    Someday, Kash, there will be that peace but not now but I hope soon..Great work and idea..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..I appreciate you reading my work about Karter and the green bean..His mother said that he won't eat them..Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 8:38:00 AM
    great poem to float around the world.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:01:00 AM
    Awesome write Kash, quite enjoyed it this afternoon.. :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:53:00 PM
    Well written poem kash....hope the bottle floats up to the Norwegian coast... - oxox hug Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 1:14:00 PM
    soupy mail!..:)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:51:00 PM
    i'll swim in the ocean to get a bottle, kashi buddy!... to me this piece suggests great respect, even reverence, for life, for mankind... stunning.. best of luck!.. huggs and come over! :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 9:05:00 AM
    Whoever would be walking along the coastline, to find this beauty would have such an unforgettable and life changing moment! How could one not think there is love in the world, upon finding such a meaningful gift?

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 7:50:00 AM
    Kash, a great poem, and a brilliant way to get your poem out there, off to fav's with this...David

  1. Date: 6/21/2012 12:29:00 AM
    True.The one thing which all of us should realize is we are one and the problems will dissolve itself.Beautiful thought and write

  1. Date: 6/20/2012 9:02:00 PM
    Kash, this is absolutely wonderful. and I LOVE the method of delivery that you have in store for your poem. I really hope you do that. I can imagine this poem washing up on someone's shore and I hope they can read it. Truly one of the best entries I have seen. And thanks for always calling my attention to syllable errors. I completely messed up thinking that last one needed ten syllables in both lines! Luv, Andrea