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A dream

I had a dream about you; I wish it would come true
I told you it was over, but still I’m not over you 
You told me that you loved me
That it would be alright
You told me I was beautiful 
The way I looked that night
We danced under the stars
We swam in the moonlit lake
But when you kissed my lips
I suddenly awake
The feeling I am left with is a little bittersweet
Because when I’m without you
I’m simply incomplete

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  1. Date: 3/19/2010 3:16:00 AM
    I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jenna. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 6:34:00 PM
    Very good, I like it!

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 3:06:00 PM

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:55:00 PM
    Great romantic write with a surprise ending...Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:41:00 PM
    enjoyed reading

  1. Date: 3/18/2010 12:40:00 PM
    Perfect rhyme Jenna - i like this write - Thanks for sharing -:)