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A Dream

A Dream Two Of us You and I Together now Along the same path We walk, locked hand in hand......... Awake now, I realize It was only another dream On my heart lies a precious wish Wishing, just once, for it to become real.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/18/2008 4:29:00 PM
Amazing how people think and wish the same dreams. Read Above Desire Miriam. Light & Love Debbie
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Date: 12/18/2008 12:29:00 PM
Im not to sure what an etheree is, but i can say this is a really well written poem. i also want to thank you for commenting on my work. Steven
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Date: 12/15/2008 9:48:00 PM
This is a wonderful etheree. The form is perfect and the sentiment touching. Hope your dreams come true! Love Robin
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Date: 12/15/2008 5:45:00 PM
A lovely Etheree...very nicely done! ~ Carrie
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