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A door was opened

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A door was opened

I lay there in the darkness,
my life had ebbed away!
I thought the gates of Hell
would soon be on display.

I said that I deserved it,
as the mist rolled over me:
with expectations limited,
I fell down on my knees.

Then a door was opened
and darkness turned to light;
I had a glimpse of Paradise
much to my delight.

This place was heavenly beauty,
peaceful and serene:
In all my worldly travels
such sights I'd never seen!

I heard a quiet murmuring,
"I've chosen you with all your faults,
go back and say what you have seen
and this time don't default."

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  1. Date: 5/13/2012 10:34:00 AM
    ooh a good one, love it xx

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much for your very kind comment on my poem, "A door was opened." Robert
  1. Date: 3/7/2012 12:02:00 PM
    A very enjoyable read... Loved it.

    Davidson Avatar Robert Davidson
    Date: 5/13/2012 10:41:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    sorry I haven't replied sooner but thanks for your great comment. Robert
  1. Date: 10/5/2011 8:54:00 AM
    I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry this morning Robert. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/5/2011 2:31:00 AM
    good write hope you do well thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 10/4/2011 12:46:00 PM
    Great entry, we got them in just in time, there was only two spots left :) Good luck with this creative piece