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A Door

In the middle of the room, There is a door. Not just any door, But a door with a hole in the middle. Pointless it seems like, To have a hole in the door. Pointless, yes, But I want to know more. It lures me in, Stealing my attention, Stealing my thoughts, My intentions. Yet, I continue on. The hole is empty, And I can’t see through to the other side. I’m trapped in this room, In this state of mind. The answers are too hard to find. Why am I trapped? Why am I here? But then I hear a voice. One so calm, and Another so loving. Yes? Yes? Love ME, Love ME, Not this door, Not the world, Or anything for that matter. Love Me more…

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Date: 9/8/2014 6:27:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Michael - I choose your first great written free verse - You write skillfully - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven -(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/6/2014 10:49:00 AM
Such a deep powerful piece which is beautifully written! Bravo! A warm welcome to PoetrySoup and continue to churn out these poetic gems! Pandita
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Date: 9/5/2014 9:12:00 PM
A nice poem, interesting ending. Michael, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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