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A Do Dah Day Arrives

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A Do Dah Day Arrives

A contextual gray
dulls the horizon’s lure,
blending the sharper hues,
softening the day’s rush
like warm cotton batting
awaiting a fine rump.

Drizzle manifests,
depressing, maudlin
lackluster, shrouding
the zip in the day,
Uncle Remus frowns.

Ole Br’er Rabbit
would not come out!
The blue birds hide
waiting for sun.

Ole Sol peeks.
Remus smiles.
Br’er hops in.

Blue birds


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  1. Date: 6/26/2012 2:14:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win with this beauty Debbie.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 9:38:00 PM
    you took this by the storm, debbie.. congrats with huggs!:)

  1. Date: 6/23/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in David's "Hexaverse" contest Debbie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:45:00 PM
    Deb, do tell me which childhood tale inspired this write..I fear I was locked in a virtual closet when I should have had someone reading me the classics...fancy storyline and full of energy! CON-grat-U-la-tions!!!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 6:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Debbie enjoyed reading this xx

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 3:45:00 PM
    Congrats on your win...Sara

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 11:31:00 AM
    Deddie~xox~ A wonderful congratulations, in David's True version of Diminishing Hexaverse. Have yourself a good day,

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:58:00 AM
    Debbie, a do dah, big well done, I like Brer Rabbit..thanks for entering..David

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 10:03:00 AM
    So cute! Congrats on your win, Debbie! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 7:53:00 AM
    Yours was just wonderful. Congrats,Debs.

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 5:41:00 AM
    Congratulations with this lovely write!

  1. Date: 6/22/2012 2:00:00 AM
    brava!!!!congratulations!!! 'highness!" :-) love this!!! miss you...i still cant this and soupmail or email is it....or carrier pigion ;-) can fill my sm up with all the instructions you care to share ;-) (i can still read blogs....) im in a creative slump it seems...all my stuff gets n/ or im on another you bunches, deb

  1. Date: 6/18/2012 7:04:00 AM

  1. Date: 6/17/2012 8:25:00 AM
    My, oh my, it's a wonderful POEM!

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 12:36:00 PM
    joy, joy emanating from this mood, debbie... this piece sings!!.:)winning huggs

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 7:52:00 AM
    so cute,well done Debbie,truly enjoyed,posted a poem Laugh out Loud,testing my mind,would like your comment...

  1. Date: 6/13/2012 5:42:00 AM
    Great descriptive work..Yes, Br'er Rabbit would stay in the den on some gray days to keep from getting wet..Enjoyed reading and this adds fodder to my genre to write something a little different..Thanks for the congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:51:00 PM
    wow, it's a SMILEY poem, Debs. and I LOVE it. One of my favorites so far in this contest.You really crafted it.

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:17:00 PM
    Oh, I had a book as a little girl about brier rabbit... was it Disney? I am so tired, I'm loopy. Wrote that po! The clutter bug speaks! As for this, hope it does well in the contest. Such a cool blend! Hugs, Cyndi :-)

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 9:13:00 PM
    I like this Debbie, and the blue birds have arrived, enjoyed your verse great entry luv vie