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A Divided Nation

Confined in one boundary, living together showing different reactions in changing weather. Stabbing each other, hoping to reach same destiny creating a stumbling block as the way, what an Irony. Loving outsiders in possession of a different gene to the point patriotism withers and becomes lean. It is time for one side to enjoy the rain then the other sits and curses in envious pain. Hatred and marginalization then becomes the trendy skill compressing the mind, even to the point to kill. Nepotism and bigotry are fertilized to cause so much evil interaction between distant compatriots liable to be far from civil. One nation, one people, if this family can together not see then for humanity sake, let everyone simply be. Separation entices, building up the end enemies of each other, yet can attempt a mend. Seeing through the binoculars of what lies tomorrow love, patience and unity, there’s a need to borrow. Diversity is a blessing, like departments of a college one can function as the nutrient, the others as the roughage.

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Date: 5/19/2016 10:38:00 PM
Love patience and unity, there is a need to borrow. Indeed. ..... ..
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Funom Makama
Date: 8/6/2016 11:11:00 AM
yeah... Thanks a lot PAshang
Date: 5/15/2016 7:52:00 PM
Funom, You have penned down the irony so brilliantly well...loved last two lines,"Diversity is a blessing, like departments of a college one can function as the nutrient, the others as the roughage." A seven.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 9:00:00 AM
Oh dear, you are far too kind. Thank you very much
Date: 5/15/2016 3:55:00 AM
A brilliant couplet my dear friend, Funom. A very impressive write indeed and enjoyed thoroughly everyline especially the three last couplets. A 7+++ and fave. Thanks a lot. love lots and big hug, Galeo
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 9:00:00 AM
Oh dear, you are far too kind. Thank you very much
Date: 5/12/2016 11:59:00 PM
Amazing poem! Thumbs up times a million! A remarkable 7!
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 9:00:00 AM
Oh dear, you are far too kind. Thank you very much
Date: 5/12/2016 1:16:00 PM
I think your last couplet says it all. In our struggle for equality, we start to shun differences and make everyone the same, not knowing that those very differences is what makes life beautiful and should be cause for celebration ... we are not better than one another, but neither are we the same (nor should we try to be) ... a great thought provoking poem, Funom.
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 9:00:00 AM
Oh dear, you are far too kind. Thank you very much
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J.W. Earnings
Date: 5/13/2016 12:00:00 AM
I agree!
Date: 5/12/2016 11:58:00 AM
Excellent, Funom! This applies to many countries that are hindered by internal conflict. Most people want peace and understanding, but greed and hidden agendas by some are a stumbling block. ~ Regards // paul
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 8:59:00 AM
Yes Paul Callus... so so true. Thank you very much for stopping by
Date: 5/11/2016 6:45:00 PM
very deep.... reminds me of my country..... Nigeria
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Funom Makama
Date: 5/16/2016 8:58:00 AM
Yes o! I am also a 9ja citizen... Thanks for the comment Andrew

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