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A Distant Sadness

Walking upon the ground singing frozen solid crisply cracking ice reality each step inside a crunching golden morning Alone looking towards the rising sun cold wind cutting chill to the bone clouds shade pink to grey Winds blowing cold breathing whispers whistling in chilling howls echoes deeply Staring faraway over snow capped mountains Distant horizon of dreams love your the light of hope drums forever in your grace will beat A daunting year for to come tears fall looking at my brother's grave not knowing what the future holds

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 1/4/2015 12:25:00 PM
Liam -- A super pen here indeed. Great Work!! Best Always, Gary
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Date: 12/31/2014 2:46:00 PM
Liam, deep and descriptive! I feel the sadness and insight. Great write! Meg
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Date: 12/30/2014 8:52:00 PM
Hi Liam! Very beautifully penned but so very sad my dearest friend Liam! Please at least try not to be sad for too long, in the end all things will work out for you, so never lose sight of God and of all your beautiful hopes and dreams.Keep them all very close to your heart and your soul. With God's help you can achieve them and everything you want to. He'll give you the strength you need to complete what you need or want to. Your pen is truly gold! A very Solid 7 for you! smiling I wish you a very Happy New Year and your very dear family ! Have a very lovely evening! :) Love and Hugs! xxxxxxx D.
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Date: 12/30/2014 3:49:00 PM
A heartbreaking poem.Your bro. is your guardian angel.He will protect you Liam .I do wish you a good year ahead dear friend.Have a blessed New year.
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:56:00 AM
so sad Liam great pen hugs
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Date: 12/30/2014 9:48:00 AM
Liam....my heart goes out to you. Let this New Year be one of new beginnings. God is on your side. His grace is there to hold and carry you. HIS love is unconditional and unchangeable. You have a good heart. He will reward you...in time. Hugs, my dear.
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:38:00 AM
- The best way to predict the future - is to create it yourself - A touching and sad poems my friend Liam - The only thing we know about the future is that it will be slightly different - The best thing about future is that it comes one day at a time - // huggs Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/30/2014 7:34:00 AM
This is beautifully sad my friend, wonderful words pieced into emotions. Glad to read you this morning :) hugsxx
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Date: 12/30/2014 6:06:00 AM
Sad and heart-breaking write, Happy new year, liam
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