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A Discarded Plant

A discarded plant was I that a traveler, a kind, gentle traveler, picked gently up, and planted in a rich, fertile land to make me a tree, a big, blossoming tree, but no, - not for him, yet for all the passers-by. I’m that tree, that tree, that he wanted me to be, with boughs so bent and so low, with fruits full of ripe and so raw, caring those that come under my bough, yet he cannot see me, because he’s Nor More
*A 1st Place* in the following contest (judged on Nov. 29, 2020) Nov. 23, 2020 SHAPE UP Poetry Contest Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand Originally, I published this piece in 2016 for About Page on My WordsPress account.

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Date: 11/30/2020 12:56:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... the form and the content in your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 11/30/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Beata, for this immensely great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 11/29/2020 9:00:00 PM
BEAUTY SHAPE AND STORY. MANY CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN, Newton. ~ Elaine
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Date: 11/30/2020 12:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Elaine, for this great comment and the congrats!!
Date: 11/29/2020 6:37:00 PM
way to go, Newton. Excellent job with this one. Congrats on the win
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Date: 11/30/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Andrea, for this lovely comment and the congrats!!
Date: 11/29/2020 12:00:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work. Yes, doing these shapes isn't an easy endeavor but you did really well with it. Sara
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sara, for this great comment and the complement!!
Date: 11/29/2020 11:29:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the "SHAPE UP" contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/29/2020 6:22:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this sweet comment and the congrats!!
Date: 11/29/2020 5:18:00 AM
wonderful write and nice tree... congratulations on your win!
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Date: 11/29/2020 8:04:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sandra, for the lovely comment and the congratulations!!
Date: 11/28/2020 9:08:00 PM
Newton, beautiful and bittersweet emotions flow from your wonderful pen. The tree shape is lovely right down to the poignant finish. This poem touches my heart. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Date: 11/29/2020 4:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Susan, for this impressively sweet comment and the encouraging complement!!
Date: 11/28/2020 2:39:00 AM
This is darling! Shape poems are ever so difficult, but you have done this one well.
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Date: 11/28/2020 3:00:00 PM
Thank you so much, Caren, for this impressively great comment!!
Date: 11/24/2020 11:00:00 AM
- Lovely written - A beautifully shaped "Christmas tree" ... best wishes in the contest, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/24/2020 6:17:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anne-Lise, for this lovely comment!!

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