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A Devil of Your Creation

The little devil of your creation Is vindictively seeking retaliation It's not just a moment of aberration It's the result of years of desperation It's the only logical ramification Of the never-ending humiliation Of the betrayal that smothered my dedication Now I see it, you can't hide your trepidation Your fear of the awaiting excruciation I'm sorry I couldn't resist the temptation To see on your face that look of frustration I bet it exceeded your expectation But you've always been my inspiration And then again, I'm just a devil of your creation!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/25/2010 5:38:00 AM
see this Sarah the form is clearly monorhyme
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Date: 2/24/2010 9:40:00 PM
Yes! I love this, so much power in it!
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Date: 2/23/2010 8:33:00 AM
Great write, love Simone
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Date: 2/22/2010 1:43:00 PM
LOL lot of action! Good one. Light & Love
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Date: 2/19/2010 8:16:00 AM
Your stle is amazing. i could feel the words in your poem here! i adore it! keep writing. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/18/2010 5:45:00 PM
i LOVE this
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Date: 2/18/2010 8:14:00 AM
Wow this is a great representation of vengance one giant poetic metaphor and i loved it i have felt this way towards alot of ppl in the past so i really understood it well. it is a great write!=)Jo
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Date: 2/18/2010 8:00:00 AM
well written poem my friend... Keep em comin'.....:JP]
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