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A Depressive's World

I want to share A story to the world About where And who is this girl This girl with velvet Locks Veiling such picturesque gaze That just gawks Out at the nebulous and ominous maze This maze of complexion Of the world’s splendour And affection And what she can’t hinder Its feels like: Spilling... Out of control... Everything’s... Killing Like… Going to- Fallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll…. And she awakes To face the mirroring adult In which she became Directing her to the world’s fraudulent personality cult And she screeches: “I wanna be six daddy! I don’t wanna- I don’t wanna be A teenager Mama” But what she whimpers Can not be heard: So welcome to a horrendous To a Depressive’s World =)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/7/2009 10:07:00 AM
strong at some point and the way you presenting it with a good style ..... :) isa
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Date: 7/2/2009 3:11:00 AM
What a wonderful thought invoking poem. Love the pause and continuation.
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Date: 6/23/2009 3:51:00 AM
Three Words. Because I Cannot Bring Myself To Write Anyothers At This Moment. I LOVE YOU. And Your Smily Face? Makes It Even Better. Makes There Light In The World. Wish I Could Meet You Sajdah <3 Boo
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Date: 6/17/2009 3:36:00 PM
somehow the smily face at the end makes it all ok. I can't explain why, like maybe it'll stay with her through her 20's and 30's and even her 40's making sure she never sinks too deep into her new world...thanks for sharing.
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Date: 6/17/2009 9:39:00 AM
You certainly make the reader recall times when we wanted to regress to a simpler life and time. I don't just want to be six, I want my Mom and Dad back. Setting ourselves up for a fall is what we do best when we regress to "a Depressive's World." Very thought-provoking write! Love, Carolyn
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