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A delicious deep dish

In her panties,
excuse this soul
I did meaningfully mean
her finger pointed to
the cherry !

My heart exploded
that fruit stored in
the dimness of that light.

Who could argue,
it clearly was her delight !

After several moments,
her point was to the flower,
I meant flour,
yes I did,
this trip I made,

was for a delicious deep dish


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  1. Date: 9/12/2011 7:42:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/12/2011 5:03:00 PM
    Ah yes, the dreaded Freudian slip - knowing you, Sir James, methinks you purposely did slip. And, oh, what a dainty dish did flower my mind. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/3/2011 3:46:00 AM
    Wonderful humorous rhyme. Makes me smile James. Clever write. Thanks for sharing. Thanks for your kind comments on my work. Dalila

  1. Date: 8/29/2011 9:18:00 PM
    Ha! That was brilliant! Always, Laura

  1. Date: 8/23/2011 2:35:00 AM
    ha3. somehow i can see that mischievous glint in your eyes while you're writing this. Quite adorable actually! ;D

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 8:37:00 PM
    You are too much my friend, some hilarity is called for and you penned it so well. I truly enjoyed this delicious dish!

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 2:43:00 PM
    OMW!!! I mean that in a GOOD way :) Brilliant James, well thanks for the twists and the laughter tonight.. You are a gem!! ~ love Wilma

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 1:32:00 PM
    Fantastic James, I love how you capture the reader with your twists. Have a lovely weekd ahead :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 9:56:00 AM
    naughty boy.

  1. Date: 8/21/2011 5:39:00 AM
    laughing out loud, james, you word twister!! hmm, your freudian slip is showing, hahaha... thumbs up! :) hugggs!

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 5:29:00 PM
    Oh, had a great laugh reading this poem, James. Just love the sense of humor you display here. Witty and provocative without being explicit. Well done! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 11:21:00 AM
    James, this is one of your cleverest sex poems yet. I do believe you are a poet with a nearly one track mind. haha. I hope your mate has the same kind of mind!!

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 10:22:00 AM
    I'm betting you 'deflowered' whatever dish she showed you, and I don't think it was your heart that exploded. Delightful poem.

  1. Date: 8/20/2011 9:53:00 AM