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A Defining Moment

She screams out in pain Anguish and exhaustion painted on her face If I had it within my power Her discomfort I would erase As she gives birth to our son

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/7/2012 6:08:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Joe. Love Carol
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Date: 12/2/2012 6:38:00 PM
Joe.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:34:00 PM
a very empathetic one, Joe. Congrats on your HM.
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Date: 12/1/2012 3:12:00 PM
What a hard but happy day..when our children were born, you have a girl too? Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 12/1/2012 7:35:00 AM
Big congratulations on your HM Joe xx
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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