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A Deep Crypt

In a deep crypt With moss covered walls All damp and musty Candles cover all the niches And dark shadows cast There’s a light Coming from a crystal ball In center of the room Showing twisted faces That can be used for evil The witch controls them Through the channels of the ball She takes over her devious ways And brings pain To innocent people All for fun
Russell Sivey

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/23/2012 2:02:00 PM
It sounds like a computer activated crystal ball, a very powerful one!!
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Date: 9/23/2012 8:56:00 AM
oh so spooky with an intriguing picture u painted with a dark visual of that crystal ball and witch Russell luv .. I so luv crystal balls ..they r as mesmerizing as these lines .. a spirited write once again .. so awesome ..
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Date: 9/23/2012 7:39:00 AM
Nice poem, but bad witch. Perfect for Halloween. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 9/22/2012 6:32:00 PM
wicked witch flying around inflicting pain with her crooked nose,lol,scary write hope she crashes into the ball
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Date: 9/22/2012 5:23:00 PM
What a great idea - doing a rengayfro Halloween. Very appropriate images for the holiday.
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