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A Deciduous Tree In the Forest of Its Dreams

in a forest a deciduous tree with an immortal spirit germinated in a foreign flora while surrounded by evergreens it came from another land where deforestation is the norm from a world of destruction and death after many years this deciduous tree became robust and admirable its trunk sturdy, its branches stout with its green wide flat leaves in the summer, colorful ones in the fall and the winds blew, and the storms came and it was pelted by the rain and hail thunder and lightning attempted to uproot its soul but the tree stood tall, and was not dismantled and all of the evergreens questioned its existence laughed at its appearance said that it was infecting the purity of their sacred evergreen forest and if this tree could think and speak, if this tree could feel it would simply say…. “I only seek a better life in the forest of my dreams.”

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Date: 8/7/2023 7:10:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your "TREE" thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 6/8/2021 10:33:00 PM
Do trees feel and communicate with each other? Oh I definitely believe they do! I really enjoyed reading about your deciduous tree. Beautifully written George :-)
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 6/10/2021 2:22:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, Anne. Take care, my friend.
Date: 6/8/2021 6:59:00 PM
Love the beautiful rhythmic flow exciting the senses in full melody sensing. great wordplay and powerful hyperbole. Peace and Love.
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 6/10/2021 2:23:00 PM
Thank you so much, millard. Take care, my friend.
Date: 4/20/2021 8:58:00 AM
Congratulations on your win George. Your metaphor is strong with wisdom.
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 4/20/2021 10:02:00 AM
Thank you Sam. All the best!
Date: 4/19/2021 3:04:00 PM
Every tree is worthy of being in its sacred space, how beautiful you put it, thank you for joining my contest, and congrats on your winning poem, George :)
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 4/19/2021 10:20:00 PM
Thank you Mystic Rose!
Date: 4/14/2021 7:55:00 PM
A wonderful free verse George and comparable to life one on earth. When a stranger comes to shore, takes root and stands tall, living a life of propriety, they're an asset to society... Belle
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George Yiorgos Stathakis
Date: 4/14/2021 8:47:00 PM
Lovely. I so agree. Thank you Belle.

Book: Shattered Sighs