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The astronaut saw the black hole And suddenly feared for his soul He chose to die brave And gave life a wave And as he went in he cried, “Goal!” The astronaut clung to his pride As his atoms were spread far and wide And he nearly cried Because as he died A voice in the dark said, “Off side!”

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Date: 4/23/2024 4:35:00 AM
Belated POTD Congrats my funny friend!! As per a clever funny last line! Your trade mark Ha! Debx
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Date: 4/28/2024 3:39:00 PM
Thanks, Deb. Hope you enjoyed our very soggy UK ;-)
Date: 4/12/2024 3:41:00 AM
Very amusing Terry, congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Belle
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:44:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed, Belle. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 10:51:00 PM
That's hilarious Terry. I really did LOL. Congrats of POTD!
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:42:00 PM
Thanks, Robert. Much appreciated.
Date: 4/11/2024 8:10:00 PM
Belated congrats Terry on your well deserved honour of POTD. Tom
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:41:00 PM
Thanks, Tom. I spent about a month concocting ‘Terror Bugs’ and about twenty minutes concocting this… and this gets POTD… Hey! I ain't complaining ;-)
Date: 4/11/2024 7:57:00 PM
I love this. Fave. Congratulations on POTD! xomo
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Date: 4/11/2024 6:27:00 PM
' The astronaut clung to his, ' well, you know. I must say, this thought made me giggle and blush. :) Clever and creative, indeed. Congratulations Terry, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
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Date: 4/16/2024 2:39:00 PM
Thank you, Brandy. Nice to hear from you. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 1:39:00 PM
Congratulations for POTD. Enjoy :)
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:44:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi. Appreciated
Date: 4/11/2024 1:14:00 PM
Wonderful writing, story telling. Excellent. Congrats on POTD. God bless you always, love, Gina
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:47:00 PM
Thanks, Gina. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 12:11:00 PM
woohoooo POTD! Many congrats Terry:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:53:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Surprised and chuffed in equal measure. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 10:59:00 AM
Congratulations on POTD. This is a futuristic poem written with great ingenuity. My congratulations is heartfelt.
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:54:00 PM
Your congrats are truly appreciated, Hilda. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A fun/cute "Black Hole" Limerick write. Thanks for the laugh. Have a great day writing away...........................
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:54:00 PM
Nice to hear from you, Paula. And a big thank you.
Date: 4/11/2024 8:32:00 AM
Your brilliance finally recognized. Congrats, Terry.
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Date: 4/11/2024 2:55:00 PM
It was only a matter of time, GW… now peel me a grape…
Date: 4/11/2024 8:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Terry! A fine one to enjoy. Nice humor and twist, my friend. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Bill
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:00:00 PM
Thanks, Bill. A most pleasing surprise this morning. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 7:51:00 AM
Terry, I was intrigued by the title and amused by the poem. Nicely done bit of word play and Limerikian humor
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:02:00 PM
I wrote three poems for this contest and chose this - eventually. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 4/11/2024 6:34:00 AM
Thanks for the giggles today Terry, and oh, btw, Congratulations on the honor of POTD! :)
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/11/2024 3:03:00 PM
You’re welcome, Linda. Thanks for the congrats.
Date: 4/11/2024 5:50:00 AM
Many congratulations dear Terry for POTD with this very funny limerick. Great to see you in the very worthy spotlight! I think he should have had another shot in the dark! :) Shame there wasn’t much left of him. Keep them coming :)))
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:07:00 PM
Thank you, Christina. Much appreciated
Date: 4/11/2024 5:20:00 AM
Clever approach Terry. Enjoy your day
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Tom Woody
Date: 4/11/2024 7:03:00 PM
Such is life in the twilight zone we call poetry soup
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/11/2024 3:08:00 PM
Cheers, Tom. POTD today, potential NA tomorrow. Ha ha!
Date: 4/11/2024 4:34:00 AM
Hello Terry, I am back again to congratulate you on a stellar poem making POTD. - Blessings, Daniel
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:31:00 PM
Appreciated, Daniel. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 4:25:00 AM
congratulations on your potd. Sara K
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:31:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sara.
Date: 4/11/2024 4:23:00 AM
Very witty, Terry. Congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:30:00 PM
Thanks, Charlie. Glad you enjoyed.
Date: 4/11/2024 4:19:00 AM
Terry, a great set of limericks, congratulations on POTD!
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Tania. An unexpected but pleasant surprise.
Date: 4/11/2024 4:15:00 AM
Congratulations on this witty POTD. fyi one doesn't have to leave this planet to find that black hole as I recently discovered. LOL enjoy your honor!
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:28:00 PM
Thank you, Nancy. Appreciate your visit. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 3:51:00 AM
Looks like your astronaut scored his goal after all with your potd. Congratulations, Terry!!
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Date: 4/11/2024 3:20:00 PM
He’ll be a bunch of very happy molecules, Lin. Thanks for your congrats. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 3:45:00 AM
Color me delighted! Your Limerick was both creative and humorous. Congrats on your POTD designation.
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/11/2024 3:18:00 PM
DEIGNATION? This is an accolade… of which I am truly worthy. Ha ha… you might say I was rather shocked, but in a good way. Appreciate your congrats, Sara. Terry
Date: 4/11/2024 1:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your great p.o.t.d., Terry :) - hugs
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Terry Flood
Date: 4/11/2024 3:14:00 PM
Thanks so much, Anne-Lise
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