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Lies seem to achieve short term gain, however, in the long run, the damage that deception causes is unhealthy for the person being deceitful.

We deceive and we fib, To fulfil a desire. We tell ourselves We aren’t really a liar. We might be afraid Of what others suspect, Of being exposed As mentally wrecked. We might be afraid Of being detected, But every lie leaves Us more disconnected. From peace, trust , and friends From people and repute. Lies leave us aware We are filling with guilt. So don’t white lie, don’t fib. Don’t deceive nor distort. Since when all is done, It’s to the mirror you report.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/23/2017 3:53:00 AM
Oh ho!..:D so true, every word. Nicely penned. :) Congrats.
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Date: 1/23/2017 2:29:00 AM
Sound advice Lewis, enjoyed the write.
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:55:00 AM
This is brilliant and so true. Well written!
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Date: 1/22/2017 4:04:00 PM
Thankyou Elizabeth
Date: 1/22/2017 8:00:00 AM
TRUE THAT you just made me feel small about this lie and you know what am gonna say the truth now or never
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Date: 1/22/2017 9:27:00 AM
Thanks Phionah, good luck and all will be fine, truth is always a better bed fellow.
Date: 2/13/2016 5:57:00 PM
True, true and true.
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/14/2016 3:50:00 PM
Thanks Iris.
Date: 2/10/2016 8:10:00 PM
Anytime
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Date: 2/5/2016 3:38:00 PM
AWESOME POEM. LINDA
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 2/8/2016 6:12:00 PM
Thanks Linda

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