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A Dear Dear Friend

Was really disappointed today Was supposed to meet a dear dear friend Things got in the way and sadly Had to postpone our meeting again I'm adopting her as my daughter An honour that I accept with pride Sadly her relationship with her real dad Was very much on the rocky side So I'm the fortunate benefactor Of a soul that's longing this connection I'm truly only too happy to oblige As I shower her with affection A sweetie this dear dear friend of mine My undying love runs deep Adore this girl more than words can say With tears of joy, I weep She's happily married with kids of her own But there's been a void in her life So honoured to be her replacement dad Sure didn't have to think twice © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 12/21/2013 4:13:00 AM
A beautiful poem from The most precious soul this world has ever known. Hugs dear Jack XOXOX
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/21/2013 9:20:00 AM
Now that my dear Sarai was a bit over the top... BUT I loved it, sweet sweet lady! Warm snuggly hugs coming atcha!!! XOXOXOX
Date: 12/20/2013 11:44:00 AM
Ahhhh....hope things work out soon...for that meeting and man...carol is awesome too!!!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/20/2013 12:26:00 PM
Youse guys are all to sweet!!!! Yee Haw!!! Love ya to bits dear Donna! XOXOXOXOX
Date: 12/18/2013 4:01:00 PM
this is so very sweet. Glad I came upon it today. I so rarely veer from personal comments but today got to peruse new poems by poet list!!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2013 4:15:00 PM
Well thank you my dear Andrea! She is such a sweetheart!!! I'm her Poppa Jack! Merry Christmas, Andrea, to you and family XOXOXOX
Date: 12/18/2013 9:31:00 AM
Such a heart felt poem Jack, Nice one...Roger
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2013 9:35:00 AM
She is the sweetest of sweeties... I love this lady! Thanks Roger... Jack
Date: 12/18/2013 8:51:00 AM
You and Cathie have a heart of gold!... We adopted one of our sons for the same reason... We can't officially adopt him, of course. He has a family... but he lives with us... and we helped him get a car, and other things to help set him up in life... A teacher helped him get a scholarship at the Community College. His own family abused him and kicked him out... He's a great guy, and deserves a chance... Dragon adores him and Joey. If more people helped others, This world would be a better World!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2013 9:13:00 AM
Amen, amen! You guys have big hearts and I'm so proud to know you! Love you my dear Carol! XOXOXOXOXOX
Date: 12/18/2013 8:19:00 AM
Daughters are always an apple of a dad's eyes, and are fortunate to have one Jack.
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2013 8:26:00 AM
This adoption I speak of, of course, is not possible though I would be over the moon if I could! However I DO have one adopted daughter and one adopted son! Merry Christmas my friend!
Date: 12/18/2013 6:32:00 AM
That is so very sweet my friend, it's awesome that you are willing to 'adopt' your friend as your daughter! If I remember correctly you don't have a daughter so this will be a special event! It is something precious to have a daughter, they are they greatest joy any father could ever hope for! I really loved reading this illustrious write my friend! What a lovely piece Jack, such a grandiose poem, Great Work!!
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Russell Sivey
Date: 12/18/2013 7:21:00 AM
Sorry about that Jack, I guess I have only heard you talk about your son! You probably have talked about your daughter but I wasn't paying enough attention, sorry about that my friend! but I do care my friend, so you do know the joys of raising a daughter don't you? That's awesome! Well now I know you have an adoptive daughter! Fantastic
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Jack Ellison
Date: 12/18/2013 6:49:00 AM
I DO have a daughter... she's adopted! She was 18 months old when we got her... now 49! Actually, this young lady I write about is married with children so I think her husband and kids MIGHT have something to say about it! LOL LOL!

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