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A Deal With the Devil

Walter Baedeker is a hypochondriac. His doctor says his ills are psychosomatic. Walter reciprocates by calling him a quack. The patient is healthy, but stays in bed. He thinks he is sick, but it’s all in his head. In a short period of time, he expects to be dead. Up pops the devil by the name of Cadwallader. The devil wants to make a deal with Walter. This is a very unusual offer. Cadwallader wants to make Mr. Baedeker immortal. Also, Walter can be indestructible. The former hypochondriac will feel no pain. He can even survive being run over by a train. To cross the River Styx, he has to pay a toll. Walter gets immortality in exchange for his soul. The man can avoid death no matter what the cause. However, his contract contains an escape clause. Do you want to know where things will go? Next time it’s on television, watch the show. Based on the Twilight Zone episode “Escape Clause”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/13/2014 6:31:00 PM
Awwwwwwwww good work writing a cliff hanger!. Light & Love
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Date: 2/13/2014 5:46:00 PM
Interesting work..There was someone a woman who got to avoid death but she got older and older and older which was not a very good trade off..Enjoyed reading this one..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 2/13/2014 2:28:00 PM
This is good. I use to watch that show all the time. Here where i live - two young guys were cought, they killed a young girl to sell their soul to the devil. Oe was only 16 years old. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Date: 2/13/2014 1:40:00 PM
Hi Robert, I really like this poem,as I do Sci Fi, I am a fan of the Twilight Zone. You have written a very clever poem,fab.
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