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A Daydreamer

My love my symphony My Reality I ponder and wait for your return To which I worry with concern It's been far to long this war My fingers actively write this score my music inspires hope to your cause As sleepless nights I long for your touch Your sacrifices are to much For your king and country I wish you could see That a woman's love needs you Please keep safe in all you do, remember to hold my heart in your endeavour For I will love you forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/11/2014 3:25:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely poem and win.
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:25:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/11/2014 9:52:00 AM
I agree with LInda..you poem has a lovely flow to it. Congrats. BG
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Date: 5/11/2014 12:54:00 AM
Wonderful wrote John ! Heartfelt and subtle ! Congrats on a much deserved win.
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:56:00 PM
About your poem: This poem has natural rhyme, and flow. I like that when reading a free verse poem. Thank you for the daydreamers land. The emotions, of concerns, and love, are felt throughout the poem. Enjoyable, and deep... always~ LINDA
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Date: 4/29/2014 6:50:00 PM
John, first things first, thank you so much for reading my latest poem.. Means a lot to me.. PS... I would call this poem, FREE VERSE... LINDA.
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