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A Daydream

Pensively, she lowers the book, gaze wandering Daydreaming about this other time and place A woman's tale of hardship and the courage to live For her, poverty and sorrow now given a face A genteel lady she, born to wealth and privilege Never thinking of a life without these things Now these words have brought a realization That perhaps great wealth a responsibility brings She turned to the piano and played a haunting tune Still thinking of the figures in the pages of her book A premonition of a change in her life to come A book, a moment, and a woman's new outlook..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/12/2014 6:22:00 PM
Quite an interesting and unique interpretation of the painting. Well done, Barbara! I enjoyed reading your winning poem! Congratulations to you!
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Date: 5/11/2014 9:03:00 PM
Congrats on a fine win BG
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:35:00 PM
Beautiful, Barbara. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:27:00 PM
Congrad's Light & Love
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Date: 5/11/2014 9:44:00 AM
Congratulation Barbara on a well deserved win
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Date: 5/11/2014 1:08:00 AM
As Wonderful as ever Barbara !congrats on great win !
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Date: 5/2/2014 1:47:00 PM
Very creative write BG....glad my poem brightened your morning....best wishes in the contest....
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Date: 4/30/2014 5:19:00 PM
:) great piece of write here.. :) nice nice and the look in the maiden's eye you interpreted well.. God bless and i hope you do well in the contest.. :), olive eloisa here thanking you for your visit. :) GOD bless always.. :)
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:27:00 PM
Too funny Barbara - we both posted our "A Daydream" at the same time!! I LOVE your entry and I believe it will place better than mine. I look forward to seeing the results and seeing how our poems - the last two entries in the contest fare. Funny how the same picture can result in drastically different interpretations. Good luck.
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Date: 4/30/2014 1:13:00 PM
a strong entry Barbara, you have captured the picture well...good luck
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