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A Day Out

A Day out Setting Sun of countryside, Ducks skitter in lake, Picnic basket, kids relish pie and choco cake. Taking turns for the frisbee, till face flushes cool, Exciting trills of Robin, water splash of pool. Written April 13th, 2015 For Andrea's " Have you tried a 7/5 trochee " contest Awarded 11th place

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Date: 5/3/2015 9:47:00 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your Trochee poem win. :) SKAT
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:35:00 PM
Hi Upma! Enjoyed your fun day out! Stopping by to say hello and with congratulations! // paul
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Date: 5/2/2015 6:59:00 AM
sounds like a fun time! Congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 5/2/2015 1:03:00 AM
Though there were several places off the meter, I LOVED the content of your poem. It creates such a cute scene. congrats in my contest.
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Date: 5/2/2015 12:51:00 AM
GOOD WIN...SKAT
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Date: 4/20/2015 8:44:00 AM
Wow! This is without a doubt a 7. I am so voracious for more of your lines right now and I definitely will come by to enjoy the bliss of your words.
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Date: 4/15/2015 9:37:00 AM
Upma, you have penned a beautiful day in words, 7, best of luck in the contest and thanks for visiting my poem, Dance Into May
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:59:00 PM
A perfect day! Enjoyed. BG
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Date: 4/13/2015 6:17:00 AM
- A lovely poem, Dr.Upma - Good luck in the contest - I wish you a great Monday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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