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A Day Out

Picnic blanket, breeze caught, and spread out on the grassy hill. Adults only on nostalgia trip roll down bank and spin as a top Rays of sunshine shoot out from the bottom of Turquoise edged cloud, which hovers over the cliff side rocks Youthful exuberances displayed in kite swirling formation Tasting picked berries and collecting them for later to put them in Iced buns and lemonade taken down to the naturist beach area moorings which have boats for hire and voting which one of either group would be the first to strip off au natural Sun sets on the horizon, deepening to an amber hue in it's final beauty

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Date: 5/23/2014 9:38:00 PM
Theresa, Nice Acrostic, win...skat
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 5/26/2014 2:17:00 AM
Hi, Good of you to read and send your very kind comment. Regards Theresa x
Date: 5/20/2014 8:56:00 AM
Great way to go with this wiinning work..Congrats..Sara
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 5/20/2014 11:51:00 AM
Hi Sara, Thank you for reading and I appreciate your very kind support. All the best, Theresa xx
Date: 5/17/2014 1:15:00 PM
Sounds like a lovely day. Congrats on win.
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Date: 5/20/2014 11:53:00 AM
Hi, Thank you for reading and for your kind comments. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 5/17/2014 11:11:00 AM
Such a lovely write Theresa ,, brings nature alive ,, a masterpiece ! congrats on a fine win !
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 5/20/2014 12:05:00 PM
Hi Dr. Upma Thank you for taking the time to read and I greatly appreciative and value your very kind support. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 4/24/2014 12:43:00 PM
Very nice imagery in this poem. It brought back good memories of those warm summer days. You did a really great job on this acrostic, Theresa! ...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments and the fav! :)
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/24/2014 4:23:00 PM
Hi Kelly, You are welcome and, as always, I welcome your most encouraging comments, Thank you Kelly. Regards Theresa xx
Date: 4/23/2014 2:05:00 PM
Sounds like a great picnic and the perfect day too. Enjoyed your creativeness in writing this piece Theresa. Thank you also for your beautiful comment.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/24/2014 4:30:00 PM
Hi, I am grateful for you reading and expressing your most positive comments. I shall look out to reading more of your poems Vincent. All the best Theresa xx
Date: 4/22/2014 11:44:00 AM
Top rating for this write Theresa! like the color and movement; apart from the acrostic build. also the rock formation of natural beauty :) // paul [ps...this is a fav :)]
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Date: 4/24/2014 4:34:00 PM
Hi Paul, Thank you very much for reading and taking the time to send your very kind and encouraging comments, as always. All the best to you, Theresa xx
Date: 4/21/2014 6:09:00 PM
well this day out on the beach poem is a real BEAUTY. You did great with the challenge and really make me want to be part of it.
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Theresa Stephens
Date: 4/22/2014 9:49:00 AM
Hi Andrea, Good of you to visit and give your, very welcome, encouraging comments. Glad that you felt inspired. Good luck. Theresa xx
Date: 4/21/2014 3:49:00 PM
I like your end line statement as an addition to your work..Reads like a wonderful day out..Thanks for the visit to my work..Goobers, ground peas are just common names for peanuts..Sara
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Date: 4/22/2014 9:55:00 AM
Hi Sara, Great to receive your lovely comments. Thank you for the info. interesting to read about how other people live. All the best, Theresa xx

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