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A Day Out

What is your idea of a perfect day out? we all would think something different without doubt It's not always the place it's not even the day a reminder of a former moment you wish could always stay It surely must be a person one you love to share your special day with such memories can be so rare Spending time with my one true love makes my special day great wanting to be with her makes one soar above My one love is my day spending it only in her light so bright indeed is her shine making my day always bright poetgord@2013

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Date: 6/20/2013 9:57:00 AM
amazing poetry, last stanza a true gem...
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Gordon Mcconnell
Date: 6/20/2013 2:35:00 PM
thanks Harry, good to hear from you, have a great day, Gordon

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