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A Day In May

Sand ruffles beneath creaming tide where seaweed bouquets softly glide; searching for crabs, sandpipers prance in crystal pools where sunbeams dance. Suspended somewhere outside time this springtime taste of life sublime stretched out upon the sandy shore just watching cloud kites dip and soar. Copyright, May 8, 2022

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Date: 5/19/2022 1:37:00 PM
Faye, congratulations on your win in Andera's contest. Beautiful well-deserved first placement write. Blessings to you.
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Date: 5/18/2022 10:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Keep up your very expressive writing!
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Date: 5/17/2022 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful! Congratulations on your big win
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Date: 5/16/2022 12:31:00 PM
Sublime! Congratulations on your 1st place win in the contest. Well deserved. :)Paulette
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Date: 5/16/2022 7:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. Have a blessed day writing away.......................
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Date: 5/16/2022 4:30:00 AM
Hey congratulations on your win
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Date: 5/15/2022 6:43:00 PM
Faye, CONGRATS on your win with this delightful poem! Janice
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Date: 5/15/2022 3:27:00 PM
Congratulations!
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Date: 5/15/2022 1:44:00 PM
This is fabulous, Faye. Congratulations on the top spot in Andrea's contest. Very, very nice.
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Date: 5/15/2022 1:18:00 PM
oh and Congrats on a top place in my contest.
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Date: 5/15/2022 1:17:00 PM
Absolutely gorgeous, Faye. Perfection in all the things I was looking for: imagery, good rhyme, sentence structure and punctuation! I just love the metaphor at the end.
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Date: 5/15/2022 1:16:00 PM
What a wonderful atmosphere you created here,Faye and with excellent rhythm and rhyme. A well-deserved first placement.
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Date: 5/11/2022 1:45:00 PM
Nice one Faye, such nice rhyme and flow with good imagery too. Take care, Gordon
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Date: 5/8/2022 6:23:00 PM
Gorgeous Faye :)
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