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A Day Comes To a Close

A teal-blue sky begins to darken As clouds, tinged by the sun, creep above And the lights of the sky begin to darken As the day comes to a close. A soft wind silently whispers across the land While the cricket gives its nightly serenade to the earth And the birds in the sycamore close their eyes As the sun disappears below the horizon. The leaves rustle in the breeze As the stag lifts its head to look around And the moon gazes down on the sleeping land As the day turns to night. A pair of eyelids begins to close. A sleeping boy rolls over in bed, Dreaming happy dreams throughout the night Off in the land of Sleep. The stars glisten throughout the night While the land sleeps on and on And slowly, slowly The Earth turns on its celestial course Forevermore.

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Date: 2/14/2016 12:19:00 AM
Amith, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 2/11/2016 7:30:00 PM
Amith, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/11/2016 1:37:00 PM
Lovely imagery Amith. I find that the cycles of nature, which you have so well described, to be calming. Thank you for sharing and welcome to the Soup.
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