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A Day At the Beacon Hill Park Zoo

A horse on the left A horse on the right. With us in the middle. Tally ho, quite. Walk through the park. It's such a lark. Walk, peacock strut, duck waddle. Walk with the group, don't dawdle. A cage of rodents at the zoo. Baby goats and llamas too. Finches, a baby pig. A peacock with a tail so big. And of course, A miniature horse. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ for Barbara Gorelick's contest "Tales From the Zoo"

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Date: 9/15/2010 11:39:00 PM
I'm reading really cute zoo poems that make mine look like nothing. this is one of them!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 9/15/2010 3:36:00 AM
Great entry Dorie for contest reminds me of ours but they now charge for everything great imagery here also thanks for your kind comments on my poems keep up the great writing blessings to you and family
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Date: 9/14/2010 9:34:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry this morning Dory and I wish you the best in the contest. I am looking forward to tomorrow and what I might read of yours again. Never let your pen lay and dry out. The best to you in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2010 10:51:00 AM
VERY cute, Dory!! Such a delightful entry for Barbara's contest. I'm sure she'll enjoy it as much as I did. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2010 10:24:00 AM
nice one , where are you from Dory, we have a Beacon Hill Park here in Victoria B.C. is that the one you wrote about? take care good luck in the zoo contest
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Date: 9/13/2010 9:54:00 AM
good luck- good luck with this entry! Sure put a smile on my face. Enjoyed the cute-ness and walk thru the zoo,..p.d.
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