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A Day At the Beach Part I

Ocean waves broke at the tide, revealing the rocks beneath the surface of the crystalline water. The sun was shining with a red hue as blazing as the fire. At the beach shore was Rosy sitting in a chair, reading a mystery book, one of her favorite kind of genre. Meanwhile, Vincent was fishing in a boat. It was his lucky day. He fished about a dozen of deep sea fish. Hours passed by and sunset was rising in the horizon. Vincent decided to tie the boat at safe port. Rosy folded the chair and picked up the book she was reading. While she was walking to the parking lot, she bumped without mean to with Vincent. She apologized. Vincent told to Rosy that do not worry about it. They talked about how beautiful was the sunset. One week later, Rosy was soaking her feet on the beach when heard someone calling her. When she looked back, saw that it was Vincent. He invited her to sail in his boat. She hesitated for a moment, but she decided to accept the invitation. After one hour of sightseeing the majestic view of the ocean, they arrived to the boat dock. Vincent invited Rosy to dinner in a waterfront seafood restaurant. Nayda Ivette 12-26-2015

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Date: 12/26/2015 8:16:00 PM
I like it very sweet..I too am looking forward to part 2..
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:17:00 PM
Lovely imagery and description Nayda I hope there is a happy outcome in part 2:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/26/2015 4:49:00 PM
Thank you very much Jan. It would be a happy ending. Hugs, Nayda.

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