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A Day At the Beach

His day began with "Reveille" blaring from within the bowels of the ship. Sergeants yelled, "Up and at 'em lads! We're takin' a little trip!" He wearily arose from his bunk to don the accoutrements of war. He'd survived Guadalcanal, now he faced Iwo Jima's fearsome shore. They fed him steak and eggs - rookies joked that it may be their final meal. But the battle-weary Marine was very grim - to him it seemed so surreal. The chaplain gathered them around and offered a fervent prayer, Pleading for God's protection and committing them to His care. The grizzled old "Gunny" yelled, "First platoon over the side!" "Down those lovely cargo nets, boys! Semper Fi!" he cried! Bobbing Higgins boats waited below to take him to that perilous strand. The engines roared as the boat wallowed and rolled t'ward that ebon sand! He hunkered down with the others, his helmet beating upon his nose. Others used their helmets to receive bits of breakfast as the boat sank and rose! Adding to the din of battle so familiar to his ears were shells flying overhead. As his boat with its precious cargo neared the beach it was hit by zinging lead! The boat struck a coral reef so they had to wade in water up to their hips. He struggled with his heavy pack and rifle with a prayer upon his lips. Brave men fell under withering fire that day as they tried to force a breach. Brave men forever lost their innocence that day on that hallowed beach! Robert L. Hinshaw, CMSgt, USAF, Retired (© All Rights Reserved)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 11:29:00 AM
Tears, Bob. All the wars we have been involved in don't seem to register like WWII. I have a V mail from the nurse I spook of one time. Have you been to or stationed at McConnell AF base in Wichita? We lived less than 5 miles south of there till '02. Your pen is magic keep it moving. God Bless, Cile
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Date: 6/20/2010 8:34:00 AM
Hey, Chief, congrats on your recent contest placements. Way to go, my friend. .. Ralph
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Date: 6/19/2010 8:31:00 PM
really interesting!
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Date: 6/19/2010 7:42:00 PM
enjoyed reading today! Happpy father's day to you!! Hope your wife makes you a special meal! My wonderful sister is making us steak and potatoes tomorrow.
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:47:00 PM
Bob, thanks for your review. Happy Fathers Day to you also. Have a good one. Cheers, Una/Ralph.
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Date: 6/19/2010 6:25:00 PM
Another wonderful tribute to those brave men. Beautiful write, Robert! Best, Jeralynn
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:31:00 PM
glad it works for you now. Linda just wrote me she can't do it EITHER. I told her to click on the numbers. I think people are not seeing the numbers of the pages??? thanks for the explanation and good for you that you missed that horrible war.
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:27:00 PM
This is a beautiful write for such a tragic battle. You always know how to bring a moment to life. Enjoyed. :)
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:26:00 PM
forgot to say, are you clicking on the NUMBERs? There are numbers above the pages. Click on 2 to get to page 2 of lists.
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Date: 6/19/2010 5:24:00 PM
Robert, I was waiting to see what happened to "him"!! WAs it you?? Great description of this perilous time. And I just went to see what you were talking about. Well, I was able to get the next contest pages to come up. I 'm so sorry you cannot do the same. You need to contact the poetry soup team with an email!!!
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Date: 6/19/2010 4:10:00 PM
Sorrowful tale of the fortunes of war. Tragic. exceptional write, Bob. Great job. ASll the best to you guys.. Rgds Una/Ralph
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Date: 6/19/2010 3:41:00 PM
Sad that war is a fact of life now..I feel for all who have had to face this and for their families that wait at home not knowing their fate day by day..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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