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A David For a David

A David for a David We’re all, a caregiver, at some time in our lives. And when it happens a smile can give us miles. Now, all of my Trolls friends wanted to be there for you. And Lilly and FunkunDilly want to give you, what’s true… Their abiding friendship, is all there, just waiting for you As is mine, our dear old friend, as this writing says, too. Now my meter’s not great, and my composition lacks… But my heart is hoping, this will eventually bring you back. When your hands grow slower, and your mind needs to relax, Think of us at PoetrySoup where we’ve all got your back. May the love in our words, help you with the love of your life. I think you know, the David I write about… it’s you… Take a look at yourself, and see what we do… A beautiful friend and a care giver, too. Your friends at PoetrySoup

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Date: 11/15/2012 11:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "David's for David" contest Carol. Love, Carol ~David~ is sure to love every one of the poems written.
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Date: 11/13/2012 8:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win my dear friend, Carol! love/hugs, LG
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Date: 11/13/2012 12:37:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carol, well done xx
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Date: 11/12/2012 3:57:00 PM
Carol. love the dedication for David.. take care~ PD
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Date: 10/25/2012 1:18:00 PM
wonderfully written poem friend Carol. David will love this. cheers!!
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Date: 10/23/2012 2:56:00 PM
another gem from you Carol, awesome...
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:51:00 PM
I am sure that David will love this work..It is very well written..I find that it has good rhyme and rhythm..Thanks for stopping by my blog..I appreciate you telling me of all the medical things that have happened to you..I am glad that you are better with the medical procedures that you have had..I have heard of the implant for the epilepsy..I am glad that they have that today to help people with that condition..I have read where they have something similar for Parkinson..Sara
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Date: 10/22/2012 3:24:00 PM
wonderful write Carol,we all got your back David
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Date: 10/22/2012 10:53:00 AM
A reall winner I haven't been able to get enough ..oh personality? into what I've written yet! Light & Love
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Date: 10/21/2012 12:40:00 PM
Hi Carol, I like the way you wrote this for David, and made him the David, in your poem,,nice and sneaky... he's adored... enjoyed your poem..pd
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Date: 10/21/2012 11:15:00 AM
Lovely written for David - I wish you luck in the contest Carol, hope you win. -Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2012 9:20:00 AM
beautiful write Carol....with lots of love
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