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A Dark and Dreadful Place

I have fallen deep inside my soul a place where if you stay it takes its toll a dark place or so it seems where the dogs bark and the wind screams where life itself is torn at the seams it's a dreadful place or so it seems but you wouldn't know because it's a place where you can't go a dreadful place where babies die the fathers don't care but the mothers cry every one is happy but they all lie a dark place where I can die I have fallen deep inside my soul a place where if you stay it takes its toll but you wouldn't know because it's a place where you can't go

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/30/2008 4:41:00 PM
That's sweet do you have a M y S p a c e? And please write your response on my third poem please. . . ^.^ Love Ya Alexz
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Date: 11/30/2008 3:22:00 PM
Oh, I've been there my friend... twice, actually. It is a place of helplessness and hopelessness, but there is a way out... Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/30/2008 2:55:00 PM
I LOVE ITTTTTT!!!!!!!! Kinda dark. . . Wanna be friends? ^.^ >.< :) Love Alexz
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