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A Dance For Life - Collaboration With Lisa Ricci

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while dangerously near the time is now we dance for life we move to love such a maneuver saves our souls slowly performing to perfection nothing matters but oneness to music rhythm to each other our slow moves circle each other cautiously positing each step each lift of an arm we turn our faces to one another a set mouth opens into a tentative smile what began as a dance of life became the passionate transition to love playing out full emotions to movement acting out an inspiring love story eyes locked in full understanding a path can lead to anywhere, far, near it will always lead back ask yourself where but don't give the answer *** July 6, 2017 Copyright © SkyWatcher and Darren White

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/10/2017 4:10:00 AM

This lovely poem reminds me of my daughter who used to be a ballet dancer, and her new beau. A sublime collaboration! : )

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/10/2017 12:27:00 PM

Hello Connie. Thank you and I hope this day finds you well.

Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 4:14:00 AM

Just like I was Connie. Dancing is a thing of beauty :) Thank you.

Maria Williams

Date: 7/9/2017 7:26:00 AM

Darren and lisa my dearest friends , what a wonderful collaboration. You write brilliantly together, dance beautifully together. is there anything you cant do? Bravo....Maria

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/10/2017 12:26:00 PM

Hello Maria. Thank you very much and yes, the same of you because your words apply to you as well.

Darren White
Date: 7/10/2017 4:14:00 AM

Thanks Maria, very happy you like our poem :)

Agnes Krampe

Date: 7/8/2017 10:44:00 AM

Beautiful collaboration, you two!

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/10/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thank you Agnes

Darren White
Date: 7/9/2017 1:41:00 AM

Thanks Agnes :)

White Wolf

Date: 7/6/2017 10:20:00 PM

You really compliment each other in this one! wornamea!

White Wolf
Date: 7/7/2017 6:46:00 AM

Coodoolly, yes! lol

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:38:00 AM

Hello White Wolf. Thank you very much

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:19:00 AM

Coodoolly (is that spelled right?)!!!

Sara Ella

Date: 7/6/2017 9:13:00 PM

Dancing! It is a wonderful collaboration <3 You make good dancing with words partners :D

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:37:00 AM

Thank you very much Sara

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:18:00 AM

Yeah, doesn't it? I also love it a lot <3 Thanks my friend.

Chris Green

Date: 7/6/2017 3:53:00 PM

My two dear friends, what a wonderful surprise to find this beautiful collaboration today. This was enchanting and such a fantastic poetic duet from two of my favorite people,. I could see both of you dancing together in this, supporting each other, lifting and just lost in the moment together. This was incredible. You two are kind of cute together. :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:37:00 AM

Thank you Chris. -- smile -- PS: There was a slight change because of a glitch.

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:17:00 AM

I was really wondering if you would find this, and how you would like it! I see you do, and that makes me very happy :) And you have understood the poem very well too, my friend.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/6/2017 3:21:00 PM

A beautiful duet...seamless

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:35:00 AM

Hello Tim. Thank you very much

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:15:00 AM

Thanks Tim, happy you like it :)

Ovidiu Bocsa

Date: 7/6/2017 2:23:00 PM

All is wonderful. Visiting your verses I met life, in many hypostasis. It is a rewarding experiebce. Best regards and wishes.

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:15:00 AM

Ovidiu, I always appreciate your wonderful comments! Thank you.

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/6/2017 1:30:00 PM

Congratulations to the both of you for this beautiful collaboration :)

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:34:00 AM

Thank you very much Heidi

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:14:00 AM

Thank you Heidi :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/6/2017 12:40:00 PM

how you both sway with charming images that really dance off the page, darren and sky... huggs

Lisa Ricci
Date: 7/7/2017 4:34:00 AM

Thank you Nette very much

Darren White
Date: 7/7/2017 12:14:00 AM

Thank you Nette :) Glad you like us sway off the page!

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/6/2017 11:06:00 AM

I had to come back and say I love it and your contribution and dancing energy that you brought

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:07:00 AM

I do too :D

Lisa Ricci

Date: 7/6/2017 11:04:00 AM

Darren Darren Darren. Words can not express my appreciation for your talent. It was such an honor working wth you again. I will forever hold this entry close and dear. By the way the image is amazing. What can I say other than and simply thank you thank you. Stay well please. Have a beautiful night. -- s m I l e --

Darren White
Date: 7/6/2017 11:07:00 AM

I loved working with you again Lisa :) Thank YOU, and you too a wonderful day and night.